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Ok, I know this one is really short, but I don't think it needs to be longer... it just represents feelings of a moment... At least it will be easy for You to read it! :D
Wanting to fall…
Afraid to let go
Wanting to have my rest…
Not wiling to give up
Wanting to leave…
Not willing to say farewell
Wanting to be free…
Afraid to be alone
This poem is really something I dont know it feels like you been watning more then just you the feeling about wanting more is different it means that you want more life other then just your greeds which is not is much deeper then I have imagined great job/ Lasura.
That was a nice poem. You really should write more. Your poems real always be so catchy cause you can read it over and over again of course! Hope to see more in the future.:D:
I'm doing what i can, writting down any poem like word that comes in my head Kuwi! :D: I think another one is about to be done by tomorow evening...
And thank You, Kuwi and dark1angel for the comments, I'm really glad you think this is ok! :)
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Originally Posted by Lasura
Oh well your just so creative!!!! Your poems rule!!!!!!! I can tell your a good writer anyway.:D:
*blush* No, that's not true... not a poem writter anyways... I didn't really like poems till I got here on Anime Online... But thank You verry much Kuwi!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by KuwiRules145
That was beautiful. ^_^ It reminds me of a lot of my earlier writing. Wants and needs contradicted by other wants and needs. That's the human brain for ya. LOL.
I especially like the part about wanting to be free, but having a fear of bieng alone. I hope to read more. ^_^
Yeah... Your early ones... it doesn't stand close to your today ones... got to improve my skills! :D:Quote:
Originally Posted by atomik_sprout
But my favourite lines are the first ones for I decided to writte this poem just because of them... They were in another of my poems and I just had to writte about it...