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    What to do?

    Ok, I know this one is really short, but I don't think it needs to be longer... it just represents feelings of a moment... At least it will be easy for You to read it!

    Wanting to fall…
    Afraid to let go

    Wanting to have my rest…
    Not wiling to give up

    Wanting to leave…
    Not willing to say farewell

    Wanting to be free…
    Afraid to be alone

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: What to do?

    This poem is really something I dont know it feels like you been watning more then just you the feeling about wanting more is different it means that you want more life other then just your greeds which is not is much deeper then I have imagined great job/ Lasura.

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    Re: What to do?

    That was a nice poem. You really should write more. Your poems real always be so catchy cause you can read it over and over again of course! Hope to see more in the future.
    Last edited by KuwiRules145; May 17, 2007 at 08:25 PM.
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    Re: What to do?

    I'm doing what i can, writting down any poem like word that comes in my head Kuwi! I think another one is about to be done by tomorow evening...
    And thank You, Kuwi and dark1angel for the comments, I'm really glad you think this is ok!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: What to do?

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    I'm doing what i can, writting down any poem like word that comes in my head Kuwi! I think another one is about to be done by tomorow evening...
    And thank You, Kuwi and dark1angel for the comments, I'm really glad you think this is ok!

    Oh well your just so creative!!!! Your poems rule!!!!!!! I can tell your a good writer anyway.
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    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    Oh well your just so creative!!!! Your poems rule!!!!!!! I can tell your a good writer anyway.
    *blush* No, that's not true... not a poem writter anyways... I didn't really like poems till I got here on Anime Online... But thank You verry much Kuwi!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: What to do?

    That was beautiful. ^_^ It reminds me of a lot of my earlier writing. Wants and needs contradicted by other wants and needs. That's the human brain for ya. LOL.

    I especially like the part about wanting to be free, but having a fear of bieng alone. I hope to read more. ^_^


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    Re: What to do?

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    That was beautiful. ^_^ It reminds me of a lot of my earlier writing. Wants and needs contradicted by other wants and needs. That's the human brain for ya. LOL.

    I especially like the part about wanting to be free, but having a fear of bieng alone. I hope to read more. ^_^
    Yeah... Your early ones... it doesn't stand close to your today ones... got to improve my skills!
    But my favourite lines are the first ones for I decided to writte this poem just because of them... They were in another of my poems and I just had to writte about it...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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