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    Great poem, Lasura. It really makes sense, and describes what many people feel. I'd love to move to Japan and travel the world.. but I'm afraid to Fly. Basically there's always a need for change, and change isn't always a bad thing.

    Sometimes, we just need to let go and try.

    Nice poem, once again.

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    wow nice one i love it ..keep up ..

    it 's too short but very nice ..
    Last edited by xxoxx; May 09, 2007 at 02:26 AM.

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    its a great poem, showing me two sides of a decision. it would be better if you make it a little longer, but not too long so it drones on. i hope u write more of these poems.

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    Thank You White Wolf, xxoxx and Raimann!!! Yeah... I know it's maybe too short but I really didn't know how to continue... I could have writte something to continue the theme and explain it more, but then I'd have to break up the rythm and I didn't whant to do that...

    Quote Originally Posted by The White Wolf View Post
    Great poem, Lasura. It really makes sense, and describes what many people feel. I'd love to move to Japan and travel the world.. but I'm afraid to Fly. Basically there's always a need for change, and change isn't always a bad thing.
    Sometimes, we just need to let go and try.
    Nice poem, once again.
    The thing is I know change is good but never can make the step, I'm just afraid of making the wrong step and ruining my whole life...

    Thank You all again!!!

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    That is a wonderful poem! I really get the feelling that you have alot of contradicting emotions!
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