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  1. Jun 08, 2007 05:08 AM #1
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    What to do

    Hey, excuse me,
    May I ask what makes you laugh?
    Is it peoples’ torment?
    Is it your harsh and humourless sarcasm?

    You claim to find the whiners pathetic,
    You expect them to move on,
    Without any regard of their personal matters
    Seek into the mirror properly

    Don’t be fooled by the reflection you notice

    You assume that the ones who break the walls,
    Sacrifice their blood and shed tears
    Stand up to the obstacles, which block you every attempt to escape
    Are the strong ones?

    But I still ponder,
    Whether or not you have experience the real world?
    Life is life and it is not the same for everyone
    Even if a warrior erases all the obstacles

    He cannot assume that life is easy
    If life could; it will make you fall on your knees

    Have YOU peeped into MY life?
    Before making your silly assumptions?
    I dare you to experience a mere portion of my agony
    If you do survive the heartache

    I’ll claim you as a warrior.
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    Re: Pathetic [part II]

    Eeeee... ok... I shouldn't say anyting bad, anything much, that should be kept in a blog or smth... But come on!!!!!!! There are people in much bigger sh*t than you!!! So come on... that "Pathetic" was ment to help upset people like you... sheesh...

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  3. Jun 08, 2007 05:30 AM #3
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    Re: Pathetic [part II]

    Hello it is just a poem. I have not even read the Pathetic poem you mentioned. Must I right whether it's factual or a reply to annother poem as well? Come on don't make assumptions now.
  4. Jun 08, 2007 05:45 AM #4
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    Re: Pathetic [part II]

    ahh....my my...a good counter back... ^^ my hands are itchy to reply this...

    good job ^^ ncie nice...
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    Re: Pathetic [part II]

    What What are you talking about :S It's just a poem and I didn't mean any offence by that [I'm sorry].

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    Ahh >_< Your poem had the title "Pathetic" sorry! I'll try edit it. [I'm sorry]
  6. Jun 08, 2007 06:02 AM #6
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    Re: Pathetic [part II]

    aww..come on... i was so spirited to reply back.. can i? ^^
    and the same goes to me...i don't mean any offence too..it's just a healthy debate... my english sucks... so i wanna uhh...sharpen it ^^
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    Re: What to do

    i like it and it is true in so many ways... it's kindof like that saying... oh... what was it called... um... darn i just had it! Anyway... i like your poem it speaks loud and clear.... as for it being a comeback to another poem... i don't believe that it is... i think that it is just stating things that need to be stated... i like it rave... can't wait to hear more!!!!

    AS FOR YOU RAY!!! IF YOU DON"T STOP HARRASSING HIM....

    off topic...
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    Re: What to do

    calm down. Ray isn't harassing him.

    Anyways I thought it was a good poem Rave. It has a lot of anger and I can quickly not only identify but also understand what you're trying to say. ^__^

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