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    Otaku MuMu Champion Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart's Avatar
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    What do you think?

    I was SHADE when I came,
    and K'Heart when I was not in pain.
    The light and the dark of me,
    that I can no longer see.

    I'm a new man removed,
    completely changed.
    My heart has a new groove,
    and my soul unchained.

    Now I'm looking,
    to change completly new.
    Become the White Rose truely,
    and be a newbie all over too.

    Relearn everything here,
    and be again fresh and clean.
    No longer am I the SHADE,
    that was so mean.

    Should I delete,
    this precious memory?
    Or shall I be White Rose,
    under SHADE you see?

    The choice belongs,
    to those that care....
    Now I just have to find them,
    but where....?????????


    -White Rose-


    "Not SHADE, Not K'HEART... just me. Justin.... White Rose if you must."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Thanks for the memories princesslady may be famous one day princesslady may be famous one day princesslady's Avatar
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    Re: What do you think?

    I loved it Justin. I see i must think of a new nick name!!!
    I hate it when i get on YOU GET OFF!!!!!
    OOMGGG!!!! >.<
    aNYWAY, Your poem was deep and full of emotion.
    I loved it just as much as I love you

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    Re: What do you think?

    I rally like when a poem ends with a question......it makes you think about the topic that you are writing about
    The rhythm overall was pretty smooth
    Nicely done!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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