"What is fear?
Is fear when you see a bear?
Is it when you lost your dear?
It can be a T.V. show,
Even your own dad that would beat you each day.
We live with fear each day of our fearful lives.
If you do not have any fear I'm sure it well find you here or there."
Try and put your poems like this it helps it alot. A few corrections were put in there. Other then that I liked it.