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Reply With QuoteThis is really good. Well written and it flows fabulously. And the subject is so -big- yet personal to you at the same time. A good way to reach people. Keep it up.
What happened to the good ol' days?
The days when kids ran outside and played.
Now they sit and watch TV all day.
Instead of doin' homework, they sit on MySpace.
What happened to summer time?
The time of year when everything was just fine?
Now everybody wants to whine.
"It's too damn hot for me to go outside!"
What happened to MTV?
Remember back when only videos you'd see?
But now it's all "reality".
The Real World is gettin' pretty sickening?
What happened to the government?
Teaching kids used to be how it's money was spent.
Wanna have a good class? You don't get a cent.
New stadiums for baseball's where that money went.
What happened to diplomacy?
What happened to having some tact between you and me?
where is the paitience and respect supposed to be,
when you keep flip-floppin' back to hatin' me?
What happened to this place?
I swear people need one in the face.
They way they act is a discrace.
It's time for me to move to outer-space!
This is really good. Well written and it flows fabulously. And the subject is so -big- yet personal to you at the same time. A good way to reach people. Keep it up.
thats really cool.......... and very true nice poem
agreed with bratling..nicely done... the flow was nice.. my... this is my first time reading ur poem i think... sheesh i should have read them earlier... nicely done man ^^
keep up the good work..
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hey, very good poem.
I agree with Bratling and Rayme, rolls smooth and is so personal to you.
well done and please write more.
Give me more, I want More...
Thanks you guys! ^_^
It's always good to hear words of encouragement.
I appreciate you guys taking the time to read my writing.
I hope you all like my newer stuff as well. ^^
This one is special to me, because I was sitting around,
asking myself these questions and came up with absolutely
no answer what-so-ever. LOL. So I figured I'd try to find a way
to get them answered, and this poem popped out of my head instead. ^_^
Thanks again! ~S
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