ok i dont know how to comment so ill start by saying its a good poem and that its a little short but i write like that to somethines so ya i like it and i hope u write more so well see ya
The sky is getting dark,
With a language that I don't understand;
But I'm walking in this wilderness,
Doing nothing but just thinking.
Thinking in how this happen,
How you get so far from me;
But my question is " What I did?
It was something that I said?
Or it was something that I did?
So answer me,
What I did?
Is something that I can fix?
O es mi destino quedarme asi?
I hope u like it, if u do, comment me.
Im sorry for the last line, but I this that looks cool.
ps: if u dont understand the las line: " or my destiny is to remain like that?"![]()
Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...
ok i dont know how to comment so ill start by saying its a good poem and that its a little short but i write like that to somethines so ya i like it and i hope u write more so well see ya
Jairo (Apr 05, 2008)
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