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    Newbie Jairo may be famous one day Jairo may be famous one day Jairo's Avatar
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    The sky is getting dark,
    With a language that I don't understand;
    But I'm walking in this wilderness,
    Doing nothing but just thinking.
    Thinking in how this happen,
    How you get so far from me;
    But my question is " What I did?
    It was something that I said?
    Or it was something that I did?
    So answer me,
    What I did?
    Is something that I can fix?
    O es mi destino quedarme asi?

    I hope u like it, if u do, comment me.
    Im sorry for the last line, but I this that looks cool.

    ps: if u dont understand the las line: " or my destiny is to remain like that?"
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Re: What I did?

    ok i dont know how to comment so ill start by saying its a good poem and that its a little short but i write like that to somethines so ya i like it and i hope u write more so well see ya

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