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    What it's all about...

    A fate.
    A home.
    A destiny.
    A heart that’s waiting to care for me
    A love that I could never bend
    A man that I’ll always defend
    A voice I love to hear say
    I love you more every day
    A wait that will soon be through
    I couldn’t be happier, it is true
    A pair of eyes that make me melt
    It’s something I have never felt
    A laugh.
    A smile.
    A tear.
    They are all waiting for him here
    A loving wife
    He can come home to every night
    A home we made together
    Every day it will get better
    A love.
    A dream.
    A fantasy.
    Once we are together it’ll be
    A different story from here on out
    This is what it’s all about
    We’ll do it together, you and me.
    Our fate.
    Our home.
    Our destiny.

    ~ Julia Drake-McCormick
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    A white rose no longer alone
    I know who's heart it is to represent
    I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
    For he's the one that's heaven sent. :
    I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums

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    Re: What it's all about...

    wow very awesome poem adn you just showd what love is all about the devotion the trust the happiness its al here i loved this poem
    very much. cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: What it's all about...

    Wow, such a sweet poem, Sincere. I loved it from start to finish. It had an enchanting flow that captured my mind to read along. Brilliant work!! This truly was a meaningful love poem. ^_^

    It's beautiful to see such great devotion between you two: White rose and Red rose. ^_^

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    Re: What it's all about...

    Love is a strong emotion to protray in a poem, but you did it flawlessly! Hope I get the chance to read more of your work!

    BlueFox1

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    Re: What it's all about...

    Wow, I'm really glad that you guys like it so much! I was just sitting there and it came to me so I wanted to share it with the world of AO. Thanks for your comments!
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    I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums

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    Re: What it's all about...

    This poem is really written from your heart...good job...keep it up!

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    Re: What it's all about...

    Love the poem, it's so deep about feeling love. Keep the nice work

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    Re: What it's all about...

    Awww, that's lovely baby. Really sweet, and beautiful, just like you. I told you that you were better than me. You truely are an awesome writer. The flow was awesome, and it spoke how you feel too.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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