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    Devoted Otaku Nympho may be famous one day Nympho may be famous one day Nympho's Avatar
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    What I've Become

    Very sketchy like and for once i rhymed. Go figure. It just
    came out that way. This is for the hate i have for my father.
    Enjoy.

    I’m sitting inside myself
    This is my own heaven
    Deprived of being a person
    I suffer from unfeeling
    Not allowed to open up
    Tied down into the ground
    A cowardice seed
    Forced to grow underground
    Not allowed to be a Me
    You say I’m nothing
    I’ll never be
    Anything I wanted
    You try to live through me
    But tell me how the mentally unstable
    Turn schizophrenia to succeed
    I’ve never had my own answer
    Just one forced upon me
    My gift from you is to suffer
    I live inside my head
    People say I’m quiet
    But how should I exist
    If this is all I know
    You say it’s the same as being dead
    If i'm not allowed to subsist
    A valued point
    At the end of my suicide list


    And no im not going to kill myself. I was just venting from a damaged
    relationship. And i never really talked about it. So yeah. No worries.

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Re: What I've Become

    i like the free way you talked and the real feeling ...
    i have it before .....until to kill myself but did not happen....but i love it ....it can be for any one ...not the father only ..anyone....hope to see more....

    Foolish beating

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    Re: What I've Become

    it is a very emotional poem. YOu put across your feelings really well Nympho!

    Forced to grow underground
    Not allowed to be a Me
    You say I’m nothing
    I’ll never be
    That bit I can understand. As I felt the same. Trying to be who I am truly am but people are alway restricting me.
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    Re: What I've Become

    I likes it reali reali good!!wat good effort u put in i can see that!!


    thank you equinn!!!!!!

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    Re: What I've Become

    Hm...you'd better let me know what's going on with this Mel...

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: What I've Become

    Grumble Grumble Grumble

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