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    What little I have.

    People are always going to think,
    Whatever it is they wish to believe.
    Even though teir opinions often stink!

    Just because you think I'm undeserving
    (your audacity is SO unnerving)
    But obviously -they- think I do,
    Diserve the world, the moon,
    and the stars in the sky,
    Love and afection and even happiness too!

    I ask,
    What does any of it
    Have to do with you?!

    Love exists of many kinds.
    Mine simply doesn't die.
    Hell I still love you too,
    Like a fool!

    And despite what you would like to think,
    Despite what you want to believe,
    I loved him too.
    I just couldn't let myself turn into YOU!

    Nagging and bitching.
    And always complaining,
    About my hurt feelings and
    All the little imperfections.

    It made me feel horrible,
    And sick to my stomach,
    Something I thought was just SO SAD
    was what I was becoming!

    But what I have now?
    Is so very much different.
    I felt something I shunned as stupid
    A long, long time ago.

    But now that it's been examined,
    I've found an amazing thing;
    Thoughts so often misunderstood
    Going without explination needed.
    Beliefs and hopes and dreams
    So often just one.

    Everyone diserves to find THAT one.
    Your so sure of yours,
    So how do you have right to judge mine?

    If I'm so horrible,
    And I'm -THAT- bad,
    Why can't you stop judging and scrutinizing
    What I -Do- have?

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    Re: What little I have.

    Hmmm... so I write you a friendly response to your poem and you get all defensive and post an attack poem? Do you really wanna go there?

    Clearly I'm wondering where the sudden hostility is from.

    Im just gonna play along with your prior explainations of your ranting and assume that this was from some time in your past. (cause I havent said anything negative to you recently)
    Oh but just incase... I now have to write a poem in rebuttal. That sucks.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: What little I have.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Hmmm... so I write you a friendly response to your poem and you get all defensive and post an attack poem? Do you really wanna go there?

    Clearly I'm wondering where the sudden hostility is from.

    Im just gonna play along with your prior explainations of your ranting and assume that this was from some time in your past. (cause I havent said anything negative to you recently)
    Oh but just incase... I now have to write a poem in rebuttal. That sucks.
    It wasn't...hostility...more like exasperation but I can see where they sound the same. It wasn't ONLY directed at you either. And most of it was past thoughts. Not current. (the turning into you is a thought/line/whatever you want to call it from a very very long time ago. when I'd convinced myself I hated everything you are.) Sorry I got defencive, again.

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    Re: What little I have.

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    It wasn't...hostility...more like exasperation but I can see where they sound the same. It wasn't ONLY directed at you either. And most of it was past thoughts. Not current. (the turning into you is a thought/line/whatever you want to call it from a very very long time ago. when I'd convinced myself I hated everything you are.) Sorry I got defencive, again.
    No problem... just lighten up! This is AO not Myspace everything should be Zen here.
    Peace not War.
    Love not Hate.
    Grease not Gel... it leaves little flakes when it drys.

    Gosh... only me and spriggan are allowed to poetry battle! j\k
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: What little I have.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    No problem... just lighten up! This is AO not Myspace everything should be Zen here.
    Peace not War.
    Love not Hate.
    Grease not Gel... it leaves little flakes when it drys.

    Gosh... only me and spriggan are allowed to poetry battle! j\k
    "It leaves little flakes when it drys"
    I tihnk that might be dandruf...

    No war. I told you I loved you didn't I?

    I like when you write anyways. So fulign your writing fire is almost worth it.. I'm just glad I didn't get you f'real mad at me. I don't like that. Let me tell you whut bobbi.

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