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    What is love? (add on)

    Ok so i have been writing a lot and this a add on to on of my first poems "What is Love?" I had writen this at the same time but forgot to up load it any way.
    What is Love?
    A curse sent by the Devil,
    In the form of an Angel.
    It seems so great,
    But it is full of hate.
    It invelops the heart,
    Then it tears you a part.

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    Re: What is love? (add on)

    Though short this part would make an ok stand alone. I rather like it myself.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: What is love? (add on)

    love is a real special type
    of feeling and that you only can
    understand with an other person that
    you like!
    The world isn't ready for the truth...

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    Re: What is love? (add on)

    Quote Originally Posted by lessaangel View Post
    love is a real special type
    of feeling and that you only can
    understand with an other person that
    you like!

    you just so happen to know that other person I am Charleese Beck

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    cool i like it alot and can't wait to read more i hope you keep going you have a natural talent for this maybe you should enter one of them in a poem contest
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Quote Originally Posted by awesomeparty12 View Post
    cool i like it alot and can't wait to read more i hope you keep going you have a natural talent for this maybe you should enter one of them in a poem contest
    yeah maybe if you know of any good contests tell me kay?

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    Re: What is love? (add on)

    Love is nothing
    But a game
    And every player
    Is just the same
    Out to rip your heart
    Tells you lies
    They say love
    Yet theres nothing in their eyes


    yeah there you go thats all i can think up on the spot
    ~Servatis a periculum.
    Servatis a maleficum~

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    Love is something I dont understand.Its like a curse...This is my curse.
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