As always you continue to impress me HS. I don't know the beat of that song but it's still a damn good poem. I've always wanted to write song lyrics myself and my friend has a band but I don't know how different it is from writing poems. I didn't look to hard for mistakes so not much to point out. Kinda' depressing for the mood I'm in right now, which is very good, but it's beautiful. I feel alot of mixed emotions from it but it sounds so familiar, so much like my life. Just wonderful HS.