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    What more do you want?

    Song I wrote using the beat to Gravitation "In the Moonlight" song


    Is it what I see there?
    Is it what I dream that appeared?
    Is my mind playing games with me?
    Don't let it be an illusion

    Here I am hoping what is true to me
    And I am waiting for the answer
    What is my purpose of my existence?

    One gentle smile seems to brighten
    I can't be who you want
    I am me
    Why can't you see?
    Truely who I am
    Please understand

    What awaits for me is now
    I gave you all I can
    What do you want?
    I don't know if I can keep doing this
    Please accept me
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    Re: What more do you want?

    As always you continue to impress me HS. I don't know the beat of that song but it's still a damn good poem. I've always wanted to write song lyrics myself and my friend has a band but I don't know how different it is from writing poems. I didn't look to hard for mistakes so not much to point out. Kinda' depressing for the mood I'm in right now, which is very good, but it's beautiful. I feel alot of mixed emotions from it but it sounds so familiar, so much like my life. Just wonderful HS.
    Writing is life again.

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    Re: What more do you want?

    I like it too, I amn't gonna talk about all the techincal stuff 'cause I am lazy, and probably get it wrong! lol, Keep on writing!

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    Re: What more do you want?

    Thank you you two. I'm glad ya'll commented. *hugs them* I'll just wait for more comments............
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