Thread: what is pain

Nice poem, I can truly understand how you are feeling in that poem for I am kind of going through the same thing...well good job and can't wait to hear more

Nice work can't say much but great delivery.

Hope to read more.

ur poem was exciting to read! good job keep up the good work

thanks to all about my poem im working on more sorry about the spelling

Shouldn't leave those hearts on the floor they might get dirty. Then what will you clean it with? Windex is not effective.

I really really like your writing. I read one of your other poems and they both are so full of feeling and it's clear like glass. I hope the heart break eases soon. Good luck. But keep writing. Definately.

I like your poem on heart breaks. I can tell you that there is a lot of meaning to this. I agree with bratling definatley keep writing the pain will go away. Hope to read more from you soon.

Verry good job Nicole. you put alot of meaning into your poems. I agree with Ice and bratling. you will get better after you write some more it is all a matter of time and that is what we (your friends) are here for.