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    What’s the point?

    What’s the point of trying.

    When no ones proud of what you do.

    What’s the point of pushing on.

    When all they do is laugh at you?

    What’s the point of trying so hard.

    When no one even cares.

    What’s the point of living

    When your heart just isn’t there.

    What’s the point of all the pain.

    When no ones really on your side.

    Whats the point of friendship

    If in them you can’t confide.

    What’s the point of being

    When you don’t know what that means.

    What’s the point of keeping on

    If you continue to lose what you need?

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: What’s the point?

    I like this poem, it was very profound, and I liked how it emanated the feelings of loss and shame combined in one.

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    Re: What’s the point?

    Quote Originally Posted by mere View Post
    I like this poem, it was very profound, and I liked how it emanated the feelings of loss and shame combined in one.
    Wow. I really didn't think anyone would get this poem so much. I was uncomfortible about posting it at first because it's -so- personal and so spur of the momently written that I didn't want it to lose it's feeling in bad writing. Thanks for your comment.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: What’s the point?

    nice poem (in a sence of its well writen and thought out) there is so much death and despare in the world it fits alot of people's lives... "The world will end. How, is up to the people."
    death and life are one and the same

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