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    What is wrong with me?

    Here's some of my new lyrics Hope there are okay lol Oh and this thing right here (*),well the reaon I have this in place of some of the letters is cause I might get into trouble for writting the real word lol Please enjoy

    Title-What is wrong with me?


    What is wrong with me?
    Why am I feeling this way?
    What the f*ck is wrong with me?
    What are these feelings inside of me!?

    I'm hiddin in the lonely darkness
    Consealing my heart
    Letting the tears flow like a waterfall
    Why am I this way?!

    Why is my heart aching?
    I don't understand
    Why do the tears keep comeing?
    I don't f*ckin understand!

    What is wrong with me?
    Why am I feeling this way?
    What the f*ck is wrong with me?
    What are these feelings inside of me?

    I'm hiddin from it all
    I'm hiddin in my lonely darkness
    My heart is chained to the floor
    My soul is fadeing!

    I'm hiddin,I'm sinin,I'm screamin,I'm cryin,My heart is bleeding,And I can't stop the stinging,What is wrong with me?!....
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: What is wrong with me?

    Deep... I didn't know you wrote! You should tell me more about you!

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    Thanks for commenting on my lyrics Vincent
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    F*@k !!?? Ohhh... nice. lol. ^_^

    I'm hiddin from it all
    I'm hiddin in my lonely darkness
    My heart is chained to the floor
    My soul is fadeing!
    This is my favourite part, right there. ^^ Nice tension and atmosphere you built there Shini. I enjoyed reading it.... uhh, well singing. O.o

    Metaphorical - Throughout it all. Good job.

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    Thanks Reese Happy that you liked it And yes I know lol Well I couldn't write the real word lol I might get into trouble lol But i'm very happy that you enjoyed it
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: What is wrong with me?

    WOW this is really good!!!!!!!!

    Did you write this yourself or did someone help you?

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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    Thanks Sora And i'm happy that you think it's good
    And I did write this myself It's all my own lol
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: What is wrong with me?

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel
    Thanks Sora And i'm happy that you think it's good
    And I did write this myself It's all my own lol
    so are you going 2 make another poem or you don't think so?

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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