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Old Jun 17, 2006, 12:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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What is wrong with me?

Here's some of my new lyrics Hope there are okay lol Oh and this thing right here (*),well the reaon I have this in place of some of the letters is cause I might get into trouble for writting the real word lol Please enjoy

Title-What is wrong with me?


What is wrong with me?
Why am I feeling this way?
What the f*ck is wrong with me?
What are these feelings inside of me!?

I'm hiddin in the lonely darkness
Consealing my heart
Letting the tears flow like a waterfall
Why am I this way?!

Why is my heart aching?
I don't understand
Why do the tears keep comeing?
I don't f*ckin understand!

What is wrong with me?
Why am I feeling this way?
What the f*ck is wrong with me?
What are these feelings inside of me?

I'm hiddin from it all
I'm hiddin in my lonely darkness
My heart is chained to the floor
My soul is fadeing!

I'm hiddin,I'm sinin,I'm screamin,I'm cryin,My heart is bleeding,And I can't stop the stinging,What is wrong with me?!....
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Old Jun 17, 2006, 01:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Deep... I didn't know you wrote! You should tell me more about you!
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Old Jun 17, 2006, 01:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for commenting on my lyrics Vincent
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Old Jun 17, 2006, 02:07 AM   #4 (permalink)
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F*@k !!?? Ohhh... nice. lol. ^_^

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I'm hiddin from it all
I'm hiddin in my lonely darkness
My heart is chained to the floor
My soul is fadeing!
This is my favourite part, right there. ^^ Nice tension and atmosphere you built there Shini. I enjoyed reading it.... uhh, well singing. O.o

Metaphorical - Throughout it all. Good job.
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Old Jun 17, 2006, 02:09 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks Reese Happy that you liked it And yes I know lol Well I couldn't write the real word lol I might get into trouble lol But i'm very happy that you enjoyed it
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WOW this is really good!!!!!!!!

Did you write this yourself or did someone help you?
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Thanks Sora And i'm happy that you think it's good
And I did write this myself It's all my own lol
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Thanks Sora And i'm happy that you think it's good
And I did write this myself It's all my own lol
so are you going 2 make another poem or you don't think so?
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