Thread: What is wrong with me?

nice work shini-chan! as i've read your lyrics i've made a conclusion that the lyrics are conveying the emotions a person that has been hiding her emotions in her heart. she has been so alone and was afraid to pour her emotions out was finding it hard to find someone that would understand her...

Thanks Ryoko
And your right.The lyrics are about me and how I feel.
Anyway thanks again for the comment

Great Job Shinigami's_Angel!!!! Keep'em coming and I be sure to read them!

"Look for the mischievious paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will be true or stay forever Blue? That's were this Fox will stand."

BlueFox1

i loved it, it was great it is something that we all could have related to at some time in our life. it is something that when you read it you think back to that time of your life and wonder
the only thing i did not like was the F**k it is still great with out that, anway i look forward to see more of you peices

hey
that was pretty amazing , very well writin' and very awesome lyrics
[theywould be very good in a song ]
anyways lookin forward to your next lyrics
keep up the good work

hmph (concentrate)
never heard u saying bad stuff
i like it
and ur in love --bloop-- >(>l.)

@ BlueFox1-Thank you so very much.

@ Shinobi-Thank you very much for reading it.Yeah I know that was a bit bad.That was just how I was feeling when I wrote it.And I also have more lyrics here at AO,so check them out if you like.


@Powerxxx- Thank you so very much And I'm hopeing 2 oneday have them in a song so that everyone can hear it

@ Baal-Thank you Yeah,I know lol This is an old 1 of mine though,but I still love it them same as my other works.