what you kno bout me?

im tired of all yall judgin
tired of my momma always buggin
tired of all the chaos in this world
tired of being called just a little black girl

always being judged before you get to know me
always gettin in trouble before i even do anything
always getting put down by my family
but they was gone for a year so they don't know me

what you know bout me
what you know bout me
what you know bout me
you know nothing about me

tired of all this stress
tired of being labled damsel in distress
i can handle my own
i can do what i do
i dont need no help from the likes of you

i dont mean to be mean but you just doing this for pity
i can hold my own, i live in a ghetto city.
tired of all the lies tired of all the pain
just wanna go out and say it again

what you know bout me
what you know bout me
what you know bout me
you know nothing about me

Very good poem it reminds me of what I used to go through. People always judging me and everyone always putting me down before they got to know me. I liked it alot.

Good poem, although there was less anger/hate ;): Capitalization would be better :)

Oo yeah! I love your lil rants. They're always awesome :2thumbs: It shows alot of who you are. Love the theme, that's what I feel sometimes too. Keep up the good job :)

thank you ellie. i love ranting and i do notice i stick out in he poem section. im just tired of all these death and love mess

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thank you ellie. i love ranting and i do notice i stick out in he poem section. im just tired of all these death and love mess

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OOOOoooh yeah can jump in? It can be like double-dutch... only I never could double-dutch..

Im tired of my baby daddy (but only the youngest one, the older baby's daddy is coo)

Im tired of females who think theyre the sh*t, but yet they cant keep my name out their mouths.

Im tired of my mom always puttin MEN over her daughters and grandchildren.

Yea yea... thats right...

They dont know me...

I think Im gonna go listen to that T.I. song now..

go head peach!! girl i feel you

let me add to that.

people you think you can trust but can't
people you wanna believe are your friends but they ain't
so me and my homegirl peach
gonna go listen to T.I and hear him preach.
lol

thanks peach for the comment

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Originally Posted by Rave_Grip

Good poem, although there was less anger/hate ;): Capitalization would be better :)

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Write theere with you. And remember, repetition isnt just the only way you can emphasize something. Play around with wording and or sentece structure.