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    what you kno bout me?

    im tired of all yall judgin
    tired of my momma always buggin
    tired of all the chaos in this world
    tired of being called just a little black girl

    always being judged before you get to know me
    always gettin in trouble before i even do anything
    always getting put down by my family
    but they was gone for a year so they don't know me

    what you know bout me
    what you know bout me
    what you know bout me
    you know nothing about me

    tired of all this stress
    tired of being labled damsel in distress
    i can handle my own
    i can do what i do
    i dont need no help from the likes of you

    i dont mean to be mean but you just doing this for pity
    i can hold my own, i live in a ghetto city.
    tired of all the lies tired of all the pain
    just wanna go out and say it again

    what you know bout me
    what you know bout me
    what you know bout me
    you know nothing about me

    Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen

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    Re: what you kno bout me?

    Very good poem it reminds me of what I used to go through. People always judging me and everyone always putting me down before they got to know me. I liked it alot.
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    Re: what you kno bout me?

    Good poem, although there was less anger/hate Capitalization would be better

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    Re: what you kno bout me?

    Oo yeah! I love your lil rants. They're always awesome It shows alot of who you are. Love the theme, that's what I feel sometimes too. Keep up the good job

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    Re: what you kno bout me?

    thank you ellie. i love ranting and i do notice i stick out in he poem section. im just tired of all these death and love mess

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    Re: what you kno bout me?

    Quote Originally Posted by princesslady View Post
    thank you ellie. i love ranting and i do notice i stick out in he poem section. im just tired of all these death and love mess
    OOOOoooh yeah can jump in? It can be like double-dutch... only I never could double-dutch..

    Im tired of my baby daddy (but only the youngest one, the older baby's daddy is coo)

    Im tired of females who think theyre the sh*t, but yet they cant keep my name out their mouths.

    Im tired of my mom always puttin MEN over her daughters and grandchildren.

    Yea yea... thats right...

    They dont know me...

    I think Im gonna go listen to that T.I. song now..
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: what you kno bout me?

    go head peach!! girl i feel you

    let me add to that.

    people you think you can trust but can't
    people you wanna believe are your friends but they ain't
    so me and my homegirl peach
    gonna go listen to T.I and hear him preach.
    lol

    thanks peach for the comment

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    Re: what you kno bout me?

    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Good poem, although there was less anger/hate Capitalization would be better
    Write theere with you. And remember, repetition isnt just the only way you can emphasize something. Play around with wording and or sentece structure.
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