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    What is it you seek?

    Behold ones heart
    Severe pain unborn
    Pure life I live

    Disguised anger you have
    Sympathy and a cure is given
    Thinking suicidal, but my light
    Makes you realize otherwise

    Unmasked hope and happiness
    You noticed
    My voice of life
    You hear
    A reached out hand of mine
    For you to hold
    A hug from me
    My warmth I share

    Reality is here
    A dream is what one
    Wants to live
    A loving smile is what
    You see in your mind
    My opened heart spreads

    What is it you seek?
    What is you hope and pray for?
    Luck and destiny from the heart
    Is what one gives
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    I hope my poem is liked. I don't really write poetry much
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    Re: What is it you seek?

    Girl its a beautiful poem. Keep it up!
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    Re: What is it you seek?

    Its a really nice poem. Great job!


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    Re: What is it you seek?

    Thank you. I just don't think others believe its good.

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    Re: What is it you seek?

    I'm pretty sure you'll get more comments. I guess it takes time
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    Re: What is it you seek?

    that's a really good poem you made, Great job!

    Arigatou Nao chan for the sig^_^
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    Re: What is it you seek?

    i like this poem it reminds me of how i was
    when people helped me out alot. i always asked myself
    that and a smile always answeard awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: What is it you seek?

    Thank you again you guys. I think I'll leave the poems, fanfics and songs to everyone else. I'm not good at it

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