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Jul 11, 2006, 07:12 PM
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 Credits: 120 | What is it you seek? Behold ones heart Severe pain unborn Pure life I live Disguised anger you have Sympathy and a cure is given Thinking suicidal, but my light Makes you realize otherwise Unmasked hope and happiness You noticed My voice of life You hear A reached out hand of mine For you to hold A hug from me My warmth I share Reality is here A dream is what one Wants to live A loving smile is what You see in your mind My opened heart spreads What is it you seek? What is you hope and pray for? Luck and destiny from the heart Is what one gives -----------------------------Double Post Merge--------------------------------------------- I hope my poem is liked. I don't really write poetry much Last edited by Shuichi-fan; Jul 11, 2006 at 07:21 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost |
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Jul 13, 2006, 02:50 PM
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Credits: 3,048 | Re: What is it you seek? Girl its a beautiful poem. Keep it up!
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Jul 14, 2006, 12:41 PM
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Credits: 3,048 | Re: What is it you seek? I'm pretty sure you'll get more comments. I guess it takes time
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Jul 14, 2006, 12:54 PM
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Credits: 561 | Re: What is it you seek? that's a really good poem you made, Great job! 
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Jul 16, 2006, 05:00 PM
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: What is it you seek? i like this poem it reminds me of how i was when people helped me out alot. i always asked myself that and a smile always answeard awesome poem |
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Jul 16, 2006, 08:17 PM
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Credits: 120 | Re: What is it you seek? Thank you again you guys. I think I'll leave the poems, fanfics and songs to everyone else. I'm not good at it |
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Jul 16, 2006, 08:49 PM
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 Newbie  | Re: What is it you seek? i think your great at it, you just seem to be just homing your skill work at but the one above was very lovely
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Jul 16, 2006, 09:29 PM
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Credits: 3,048 | Re: What is it you seek? I also think you're great at it too *smiles*
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Jul 16, 2006, 11:44 PM
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Credits: -167 | Re: What is it you seek? NO!!! Don't stop yet! I see major talent peeking out! Dig a little deeper and you'll find it! This poem was great! oh, one more thing.... I remember when I was tricked into reading Gravitation. I wanted to puke..... but that's just me. |
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