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    Wheel of life

    The days gone
    Between vigilance and dream
    We live today
    And dream a bout tomorrow
    We move with the wheel of life
    Eat and drink
    Rejoice and grieve
    Lost and find
    Sick and heal
    Married and divorce
    Born and die
    But, suddenly the wheel stops
    And we stop with it
    And we see the end of the path
    That we move it all the time in this life
    This rule of the life
    That we lived
    From darkness of the mother womb out into world
    To return back to the darkness of the grave
    And we don’t have while we walking anything
    Only a moment of life and vibrant presence

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Wheel of life

    i thought it was a nice read except i didnt get " That we move it all the time in this life
    This rule of the life " it kinda confused me i think you should've put this somewhere else to make it flow better.
    but good job tho
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