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Reply With Quotei thought it was a nice read except i didnt get " That we move it all the time in this life
This rule of the life " it kinda confused me i think you should've put this somewhere else to make it flow better.
but good job tho
The days gone
Between vigilance and dream
We live today
And dream a bout tomorrow
We move with the wheel of life
Eat and drink
Rejoice and grieve
Lost and find
Sick and heal
Married and divorce
Born and die
But, suddenly the wheel stops
And we stop with it
And we see the end of the path
That we move it all the time in this life
This rule of the life
That we lived
From darkness of the mother womb out into world
To return back to the darkness of the grave
And we don’t have while we walking anything
Only a moment of life and vibrant presence
Foolish beating
i thought it was a nice read except i didnt get " That we move it all the time in this life
This rule of the life " it kinda confused me i think you should've put this somewhere else to make it flow better.
but good job tho
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the GreatestThank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
xxoxx (Feb 10, 2009)
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