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Wheels of Destiny
Raised through the bad and bitter
Till every move I made seem to falter
Baby steps has marked the end of life’s worriless times
No longer hearing to pure and innocent hymns
Life’s Amazon had unknowingly formed our character
To learn that hurt could origin from different matters
Forced to acknowledge the thorns that grew between the flowers
And tread the earth’s faulty paths that’s filled with unknown disasters
Siblings to friendships to true love
Winding roads that never seems to meet at its curve
Until the death reaper lurks somewhere near
A fate which every soul learns to fear
The wheel of destiny spins and takes its courses
Dominating our lives with unimaginable forces
Picking those worthy enough to rise from the others
The journey alone proves to be the hardest
Foretold legends about life after death
Mysteries that no one could possible leave to rest
Only time will unveil this prophecy
Shame it is, no one could possibly pass this legacy
We’re puppets playing on stage
Not knowing we’re living in a cage
Succumbed to wander the sands of time
Darkness is the answer we seek to find…
OMG that is awsome ^__^ 10/10 really its awsome love it
^^; Is lovey,but the and was kinda harsh no?
Welcome back to elie. ^.^ I missed you!!
Juz posting a random poem I made recently, thx ^^
I'll drop by once in awhile I guess..
If you tried to have a rhyme scheme? It didnt go so well in the poem.
Seduced by Flesh
I think elie26 did have a rhyming scheme with the poem, it was just that it was inconsistent in some parts of the poem, and the inconsistency sort of ruined the flow of rythm of the whole poem.Originally Posted by Kasai
Besides that, however, I like your poem. It was the right choice of title in my opinion (which is a significant factor), and your poem was able to to support that title, never faltering from its main theme. I also liked your theme. Your poem, with your choice of words, was well presented, and I enjoyed reading it ^^ Good work!
Wow, awesome poem, harsh though... wow o_o ^_^
Very good poem although it was a little dark. I'm sure your next will be good too.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
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