It's been a while since i have read one of your poems.It is good to read something that you wrote because of the fact that yours is unusually creative,despite the fact that your rhyming schem is inconsistent.I like the darkness of this poem.Yeah..keep it up.
very nice poem ^^, such a harsh truth
no complains from me
Nice one, Elie. Nice use of words. The rhyming didn't really flow with me.. but the poem itself had great value and meaning. Nice work.
Last edited by The White Wolf; Mar 27, 2007 at 09:39 AM.
Very good. I will need to check more of your poems.
Perfection is dull