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    When all was silent

    When all was silent
    When all was silent, when no one spoke
    A water drop was heard from the distance.
    The drop of water that turned into tears
    and ran down my emotionless face and
    and my blood stained cheecks,
    when all was silent.

    When all was silent, when i was alone
    No one heard my voice,the voice of sadness and torture.
    The voice that cried in angry and confusion.
    When all was silent

    When all was silent, no voice could be heard,
    but only my crying heart that sobbed in pain
    as my loved one died in my hands.
    When all was silent.

    This is my first poem

    If you try and fly to your goal you will only fall from the starry sky

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    Re: When all was silent

    i like this poem desriving how your heart just wants to
    die i have been here befr when someone i loved died
    you exprressed it really good and the closingwas excellent
    becuase your showingyour pain at its most extream point very good poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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