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    when a boy makes a girl jealous

    more of a story but still poemish....

    boy and a girl,
    the best of friends.

    From elementary to high school
    from
    beginning to end.


    Through all those years
    their friendship grew.

    They both felt the same,
    but neither knew.

    Each waking momentsince the day they met.
    They both loved each other
    sunrise to sunset.

    He was all she had
    in her terrible life.
    He was the one
    who kept her from her knife.

    She was his angel,
    she made him smile.
    Though life threw him curves,
    she made it all worth while.

    Then one day
    things went terribly wrong.

    The next few weeks
    were like a very sad
    song.

    He made her jealous
    on purpose he tried.

    When the girl asked, "Do you love her?"
    on purpose he lied.

    He played with jealousy
    like it was a game.
    Little did he know
    Things would never be the same.


    His plan was working
    but he had no clue.
    How wrong things would go,
    the damage he would do.


    One night she broke down,
    feeling very
    alone.


    Just her and the blade,
    no one else home.
    She dialed his number,
    he answered, "Hello"
    She told him she loved him
    and hung up the phone.


    He raced to her
    house
    just a minute too late.
    Found her lying in blood,
    her heart
    had no rate.


    Beside her was a note,
    in it her confession.
    Her love for this boy,
    her only obsession.


    As he read the note,
    he knelt down and cried.
    Grabbed her knife,
    and he laid by her side
    that night they both died.


    She was found in his arms,
    both of them dead.
    Under her


    a note



    his handwriting said:
    "I loved her
    so, she never knew.
    All this time
    I loved her
    too."





    if u dont tell the person u love them it'll be a mistake


    tell


    the



    love of



    ur life that you love them
    or it will be a mistake


    tell her/him now before its to late
    you dont wanna go through yrs not knowing
    what could have been

    i'd rather know
    what they thought\
    even if they didn't.....
    (-)4(|< 7(-)3 P14|\|37

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    That was awesome, it was so deep and sad!!


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Sad, sad because things like this do happen now and back then too.
    Perfection is dull

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    I liked it. It was full of sad and happy emotions. nice job and I look forward to reading your next poem.

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    Re: when a boy makes a girl jealous

    it so sad because it real life too but,great work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up look forward too your next poem.
    poohs my boo

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