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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: in the ally taggin ur buildings
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![]() ![]() Credits: 725 | when a boy makes a girl jealous more of a story but still poemish....boy and a girl, the best of friends. From elementary to high school from beginning to end. Through all those years their friendship grew. They both felt the same, but neither knew. Each waking momentsince the day they met. They both loved each other sunrise to sunset. He was all she had in her terrible life. He was the one who kept her from her knife. She was his angel, she made him smile. Though life threw him curves, she made it all worth while. Then one day things went terribly wrong. The next few weeks were like a very sad song. He made her jealous on purpose he tried. When the girl asked, "Do you love her?" on purpose he lied. He played with jealousy like it was a game. Little did he know Things would never be the same. His plan was working but he had no clue. How wrong things would go, the damage he would do. One night she broke down, feeling very alone. Just her and the blade, no one else home. She dialed his number, he answered, "Hello" She told him she loved him and hung up the phone. He raced to her house just a minute too late. Found her lying in blood, her heart had no rate. Beside her was a note, in it her confession. Her love for this boy, her only obsession. As he read the note, he knelt down and cried. Grabbed her knife, and he laid by her side that night they both died. She was found in his arms, both of them dead. Under her a note his handwriting said: "I loved her so, she never knew. All this time I loved her too." if u dont tell the person u love them it'll be a mistake tell the love of ur life that you love them or it will be a mistake tell her/him now before its to late you dont wanna go through yrs not knowing what could have been i'd rather know what they thought\ even if they didn't.....
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![]() ![]() Credits: 419 | Sad, sad because things like this do happen now and back then too.
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Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,336 | I liked it. It was full of sad and happy emotions. nice job and I look forward to reading your next poem. |
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