When Dreams Collide

psychical · May 27, 2008, 11:11 AM

"Go take your soul, make an ode to the lonely-hearted." And so I did.

Here's some cheese by yours truly. I had to get this off my chest as soon as I could.

When Dreams Collide

She set out for a stroll one day
Beneath the silver clouds of May
With sun-parched leaves beneath her feet
And knowing that it’s him she’ll meet
Across the field; meet him she does –
He’s not one to betray her trust –
So to the rippling brook they go
And side by side; but does she know
He wouldn’t take her by the hand?

For his heart beats with other plans:
“Not for the lovely dame with me
But for the one in dreams I see,
Sometimes I think of how she’s been
Last time we met, we were thirteen
The skies were bluer, days were fair
And answers to each other’s prayers
We both were; but for keeps? Oh, no
For sep’rate ways we had to go
So we made promises back then

Like ‘To make sure we meet again’
To young hearts, that would seem certain
But the years wear down, just like rain,
The mem’ries… But I won’t forget!”
And thus on her his mind did set.
But what of her who’s with him now?
Seemingly looking at the boughs
Of trees in bloom; she steals a glance
Of him as he drifts by, her chance!
And suddenly, it all comes down.

And then the whole world makes no sound.

His hearth, it burns
But not for her.
How does she know?
In his eyes, it shows.

‘Twas a hint, yet one so strong
That now she really can’t be wrong
Thoroughly ripped apart inside, at most
Woe is her, love’s labors lost!
All thoughts of her lips to his,
Gone – the wind is all that’s left for her to kiss
She puts on a grin, but that won’t stay
‘Til the end of the stroll she took one day
With him, warm yet distant, beneath the silver clouds of May.

cojoe5 · May 27, 2008, 11:14 AM

*sniffle* beautyful that was so good you should make more

Kiani Haki22 · May 27, 2008, 12:05 PM

Oh that is so sweet....I love it, but it is also sad....I hope to see more.

May 27, 2008, 11:11 AM	#1 (permalink)
psychical Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Völkerwanderung Posts: 252 Thanks: 1 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 10,790	When Dreams Collide "Go take your soul, make an ode to the lonely-hearted." And so I did. Here's some cheese by yours truly. I had to get this off my chest as soon as I could. When Dreams Collide She set out for a stroll one day Beneath the silver clouds of May With sun-parched leaves beneath her feet And knowing that it’s him she’ll meet Across the field; meet him she does – He’s not one to betray her trust – So to the rippling brook they go And side by side; but does she know He wouldn’t take her by the hand? For his heart beats with other plans: “Not for the lovely dame with me But for the one in dreams I see, Sometimes I think of how she’s been Last time we met, we were thirteen The skies were bluer, days were fair And answers to each other’s prayers We both were; but for keeps? Oh, no For sep’rate ways we had to go So we made promises back then Like ‘To make sure we meet again’ To young hearts, that would seem certain But the years wear down, just like rain, The mem’ries… But I won’t forget!” And thus on her his mind did set. But what of her who’s with him now? Seemingly looking at the boughs Of trees in bloom; she steals a glance Of him as he drifts by, her chance! And suddenly, it all comes down. And then the whole world makes no sound. His hearth, it burns But not for her. How does she know? In his eyes, it shows. ‘Twas a hint, yet one so strong That now she really can’t be wrong Thoroughly ripped apart inside, at most Woe is her, love’s labors lost! All thoughts of her lips to his, Gone – the wind is all that’s left for her to kiss She puts on a grin, but that won’t stay ‘Til the end of the stroll she took one day With him, warm yet distant, beneath the silver clouds of May. __________________ "Angels fly because they take themselves lightly." - G.K. Chesterton Pajamas Media \| Free Lebanon!
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May 27, 2008, 11:14 AM	#2 (permalink)
cojoe5 Otaku Join Date: May 2008 Location: Tennessee Posts: 170 Thanks: 4 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 4,575	Re: When Dreams Collide sniffle beautyful that was so good you should make more __________________ Assistant Commander Master Ninja
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Kiani Haki22 Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2008 Location: In the middle of nowhere aka wright city Posts: 526 Thanks: 86 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 13,452	Re: When Dreams Collide Oh that is so sweet....I love it, but it is also sad....I hope to see more. __________________ [Myspace] [Forum Profile] [The Journey my RPG] [My Social Group] [My Story] [Love Song]
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