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    When goodbyes seem to go on forever

    Ahh... so many poems to read!!!! I'll die when I get internet... but I have to do it... most of yall will get my comments I promise!!!
    But for now... my investment in this poem section will be another poem, I myself find this nice, just because it was created mostly while talking to you know who.

    Our goodbyes seem to go on forever
    Like if there was no chance of us being together...
    Our whispers, they echo in the dark,
    Strengths fading but sleep not able to tear us apart.

    I never feel like letting you go-
    I just can’t help my not to show;
    I’m afraid of missing you too much,
    So scared of never again feeling your touch…

    But we are like one
    So you’re never really gone-
    I still feel your pain,
    Though your million miles away.

    We share the same dream, same passion, same love
    Even my thoughts you seem to know

    We’ll fall, we’ll bleed, we’ll cry and die
    But we’ll be happy, if not here then up there, in the sky…

    We’ll make it through, I promise, I swear,
    The pain of loosing would be too hard to bear…
    Goodbye but not farewell tonight we say
    Forever in our hearts together we’ll sty.

    P.s. this poem will be improved as time passes though...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: When goodbyes seem to go on forever

    @.@ wow... i love this laura... truly marvelous.... very good indeed... u depict how it feels nicely... ^^

    "We share the same dream, same passion, same love
    Even my thoughts you seem to know" hehe,.. ^^

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    Re: When goodbyes seem to go on forever

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Ahh... so many poems to read!!!! I'll die when I get internet... but I have to do it... most of yall will get my comments I promise!!!
    But for now... my investment in this poem section will be another poem, I myself find this nice, just because it was created mostly while talking to you know who.

    Our goodbyes seem to go on forever
    Like if there was no chance of us being together...
    Our whispers, they echo in the dark,
    Strengths fading but sleep not able to tear us apart.

    I never feel like letting you go-
    I just can’t help my not to show;
    I’m afraid of missing you too much,
    So scared of never again feeling your touch…

    But we are like one
    So you’re never really gone-
    I still feel your pain,
    Though your million miles away.

    We share the same dream, same passion, same love
    Even my thoughts you seem to know

    We’ll fall, we’ll bleed, we’ll cry and die
    But we’ll be happy, if not here then up there, in the sky…

    We’ll make it through, I promise, I swear,
    The pain of loosing would be too hard to bear…
    Goodbye but not farewell tonight we say
    Forever in our hearts together we’ll sty.

    P.s. this poem will be improved as time passes though...
    wow long time form the Last one but ,
    That was really sweet and truely Poem ..
    I love it ..It such as a Nice feeling put in this Poem ..*OMG*
    Hope to see more ...

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    Re: When goodbyes seem to go on forever

    oh Lasura you are great at writing stories and i find out you write poems....thats so cool!!!^^ i love it..its so nice.....i wish i could write poetry

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    Re: When goodbyes seem to go on forever

    Thank You Renn ^^ and thank you xxoxx and thank You Ray!!!! ^^

    I'm glad you like it and find it romantic! ^^ That is just what I wanted to achieve ^^ Yay!!!!

    Thank You friends for reading it and commenting ^^ that means a lot! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: When goodbyes seem to go on forever

    Wow Lasura it's been a while since I've been on and reading poems but this just simply a great work! Like your others!!!! Who's going to be the winner of poems that will be Lasura! So GO GO GO LASURA!!!!!! Yah Lasura! I love the poem since it's just so sweet and adorable! ^^ Yah Lasura so I hope to see more! ^^
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