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    When its all said and done

    As all the pain begun
    I die a little inside
    To know you killed the fun

    I see the hate in your eyes
    But lately it hasn’t be a huge surprise

    I stop to watch you
    To see the person I knew
    Has turned in to you

    But I pray that you
    Have changed for the better
    Hell! I’m a fool.

    I die a little inside
    To see All the love I gave
    Has died at my feet
    I cry in grief

    But lets see
    Where only human I guess
    Every change is good for the best
    Lets put it to the test

    I used to know a kind caring person
    But I ask my self every night
    Where has that person gone
    But I know deep inside
    You’ll never change when its all said and done
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    Re: When its all said and done

    Nicely done there shippo... it's quite sad... ^^ when some1 we knew change to a different person.. *sigh* :/

    Good job ^^ keep it up girl ~! ^^

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    Re: When its all said and done

    Yea... I can imagine how that is, though I hope it won't ever happen to me... it just s**ks when someone changes for the worst like that- has been a nice caring person but decided to change for what he thinks is best- usually arrogant and stuff... it's so bad! so wrong! but it happens...

    A nice, very serious, quite sad and a bit angry poem, I enjoyed reading this...

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    Re: When its all said and done

    I was a very sad poem i liked it it was exterly serious keep it up,


    ps poeple do change alot and thats sad.

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