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    When There Is Lightening

    In dark sky lights flash.
    On battlefields or in bed,
    All warriors go.
    What happens after, none know.
    Among stars to their souls clash?

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    Re: When There Is Lightening

    Very interesting, but i don't understand what you're trying to say, unless you're not saying anything through the poem.

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    Re: When There Is Lightening

    Quote Originally Posted by DemonicKagomeTahoshi View Post
    Very interesting, but i don't understand what you're trying to say, unless you're not saying anything through the poem.
    Actually there is a grammatical error in this one. I meant When There Is Lightning. And what I meant is that maybe the lightning in the sky is the sound of warriors spirits still clashing in the heavens.

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