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    When Two Become One

    A deep stare between two people.
    Their eyes cannot pull themselves
    away from one another.

    Words of love and passion
    become exchanged, as the two
    embrace eachother; as if tonight
    is the last night of their lives.

    Tears fall from their eyes.
    They both realize that they
    cannot live without eachother.

    Try as they might, they can
    never live life fully, heading
    in two different directions.

    Old wounds start to heal,
    all worries dissapear.
    It seems, this night, that
    they have found true bliss.

    Breathing becomes heavy
    as they kiss and the feeling
    of soft skin on their fingers
    makes them miss eachother more.

    A lost feeling of want and need
    returns as they claw and bite eachother.
    A pleasurable pain that leaves
    marks to remind them of their love.

    This is what happens when two
    people love eachother. This is
    the process of two becoming one.


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    Re: When Two Become One

    uummm... my... vivid... nice descriptions... *sighs* i miss her..sheesh... nice poem... keep up the good work... love it~! ^^ this is the best i've read from you...

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    Re: When Two Become One

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    this is the best i've read from you...
    Really??? Wow!! Thanks!

    I'm glad you like it so much! I had no idea that it would get any good comments. When I don't rhyme, I don't really feel too confident about what I write. It's a bit different, I suppose.

    I appreciate your taking the time to read this, and thanks for your comment! ^_^


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