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  1. Oct 28, 2007 05:07 AM #1
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    Away~

    When you go away~

    Again,
    I must endure this pain.
    Singing to our song,
    I can only hope we are closer as i am sighing.

    Today I thought will be like always,
    instead we fought against bursting tears.
    It was such a suprise to me.
    It feels like the sun will never rise again.

    I love you my love...
    My white dove keep chanting this words,
    i was doing the same too.
    Brushing her hair as she rubs my back.

    The longest goodbye,...

    We broke our record today,
    you broke into laughter when i say that.
    Cute you are my dear,
    I find myself lost without you here...

    Everyday's farewell was excrutiating enough,
    it was tough eventhough we'll meet tomorrow.
    It brings more sorrow to know we wont meet for a while,
    they pile out of nowhere each day as you are away.

    Now you are back,
    but our happy day was hacked.
    The tragedy of 22 october ruins it,...
    the two lovers now frown....

    Know that your arrival lifts my spirit up,
    all the sadness breaks up and fades.
    Like a rock that turns to sand and brushed away by the wind.
    A beaten down soul becomes livelier with just a touch from your hands.

    Fear not my dear...
    even our future is not certain...
    even if things may seem bleak...
    I am freaking sure that in the end...

    Everything is going to be just fine~
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  2. Oct 28, 2007 08:26 PM #2
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    Re: when you go on a holiday? :p

    Bravo... Such emotion. And the images it created in my mind. Almost like looking at a photo album. With all the pictures taken of a couple's departure. Over and over again... they part ways... Sometimes happy, sometimes sad. But they always come back to eachother.
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  3. Oct 29, 2007 01:59 AM #3
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    Re: when you go on a holiday? :p

    ^^ thx peachy glad to hear you enjoyed it..

    But they always come back to eachother.
    keep in mind they never like parting.. and the moment they are together again feels like going into the heaven's door ^^
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    Re: when you go on a holiday? :p

    *wipes tears* this is such a beautiful poem... It's all that Peach said... I have no words I must say

    All so true and all so beautiful... you really know how to put your feelings in words... I admire it... A wonderful work...

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    I remember the day you said that to me... -sighs- the memories you brought back with this poem..... mean so much.... -tears up- Congrats to being able to do that. It was.... great..... keep it up. -walks away-
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    It is such a lovely poem. I LOVE it! Outstanding work. Keep it up! =D
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    Re: when you go on a holiday? :p

    @.@ eek.. dont cry.... :/ ty dear ^^

    Umm @.@ thx.. ty for spending your time reading my poem...

    Sure.. thx Tifa.. will do so ^^
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    Re: when you go on a holiday? :p

    umm...nice poem Ray although it seems to be sad it is a good poem^^
    nice descreption too
    keep up the good work^^

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