Thread: When you ,When I

Awwwww...such a cute poem. It reminds me of my love life when I was 12 for some reason. I hope to see more in the future!!!

Originally Posted by xxoxx

When you said forever
you meant a few months
When i said forever
I meant every day until I died
When you said always
you meant until you couldn't handle it anymore
When i said always
I meant until time ended
When you said you loved me
you meant i was no different from any other girl
When i said i loved you
I meant i had never felt what i felt for you

Yay! Woooo hoooo... I'll stand behind this poem 100%.

Aint that what they do... just talk a bunch of mess to you, and you believe it and give away you heart...

Well I hope your life picks up from here...
Yep... I know exactly how you feel!

thank you veeeeeeeeeery much for the cute commenet to my poem Peach_follows and KuwiRules145.....

aw... i found both the poem and title interesting. Sad to see how guys just throw u away at times doesn't it >_< Well i think it'll be easier to read if u capitalize some of the words.. especially cuz it's in bright colours. A nice read, keep up the work ^^

thank you very much elie26 for your cute coomenet and i will do what you say next time...

This poem is not 2 bad because it is worth reading.The repetitions is great and i like the idea of a poem which i can feel the words.Good job.

Ithik you are verygood keep work with your poem


forever