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    When you ,When I

    When you said forever
    you meant a few months
    When i said forever
    I meant every day until I died
    When you said always
    you meant until you couldn't handle it anymore
    When i said always
    I meant until time ended
    When you said you loved me
    you meant i was no different from any other girl
    When i said i loved you
    I meant i had never felt what i felt for you

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    Re: When you ,When I

    Awwwww...such a cute poem. It reminds me of my love life when I was 12 for some reason. I hope to see more in the future!!!
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    Re: When you ,When I

    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    When you said forever
    you meant a few months
    When i said forever
    I meant every day until I died
    When you said always
    you meant until you couldn't handle it anymore
    When i said always
    I meant until time ended
    When you said you loved me
    you meant i was no different from any other girl
    When i said i loved you
    I meant i had never felt what i felt for you

    Yay! Woooo hoooo... I'll stand behind this poem 100%.

    Aint that what they do... just talk a bunch of mess to you, and you believe it and give away you heart...

    Well I hope your life picks up from here...
    Yep... I know exactly how you feel!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    thank you veeeeeeeeeery much for the cute commenet to my poem Peach_follows and KuwiRules145.....

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    Re: When you ,When I

    aw... i found both the poem and title interesting. Sad to see how guys just throw u away at times doesn't it >_< Well i think it'll be easier to read if u capitalize some of the words.. especially cuz it's in bright colours. A nice read, keep up the work ^^

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    thank you very much elie26 for your cute coomenet and i will do what you say next time...

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    Re: When you ,When I

    This poem is not 2 bad because it is worth reading.The repetitions is great and i like the idea of a poem which i can feel the words.Good job.

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    Re: When you ,When I

    Ithik you are verygood keep work with your poem


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