Where'd you go?

*Blade X* · Sep 17, 2006, 08:27 AM

We were so close together,
We declared our love for each other,
I couldn't wait to see you each day,
You missed me when we didn't talk.

I enjoyed the sound of your sweet voice,
You loved looking into my eyes,
We held each other close each day,
Exploring each other.

But there's a gap,
Silence rings through me,
My eyes searching for you,
Your sweet, beautiful face,

You lefted without a word,
There's no ending to our story,
The lights have gone out on me,
The play is unfinished,
There is no Romeo and Juliet.

I walked feeling light,
But that missing weight,
I do not want to feel,
I've gone cold without your warmth.

Where'd you go?
Did I wrong you somehow?
I feel so lost without you here.
I loved you but you've gone without a word.

this is for someone tht was close to my heart, enjoy ppl and comment

*JustLoseIt* · Sep 17, 2006, 08:33 AM

Wow........... I don't even know what to say really.

But how the Poem is anyhow, It's Great.

hinata89 · Sep 17, 2006, 08:35 AM

yay. i'm second to post. it was really beautiful. but sad. and when a poem brings out feelings in others, you know it's good. when reading this i felt your sadness at the situation and also felt a stiring inside that made me think of a similar situation in my life.

*Blade X* · Sep 17, 2006, 08:59 AM

this is for my most recent ex coz we're not together..

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 17, 2006, 09:12 AM

very cool poem man and the love hee really rings true with alot of people
its a shame ti ends like it does but love is a double edge sword and you risk
getting cut evry time you love but its worth the risk thats for sure

Yippy123 · Sep 17, 2006, 11:27 AM

Waa *cries* nooo i cant take it! its so sad... Yes it is a shame how it ended but at least u have warm memories

Sep 17, 2006, 08:27 AM	#1 (permalink)
Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,315	Where'd you go? We were so close together, We declared our love for each other, I couldn't wait to see you each day, You missed me when we didn't talk. I enjoyed the sound of your sweet voice, You loved looking into my eyes, We held each other close each day, Exploring each other. But there's a gap, Silence rings through me, My eyes searching for you, Your sweet, beautiful face, You lefted without a word, There's no ending to our story, The lights have gone out on me, The play is unfinished, There is no Romeo and Juliet. I walked feeling light, But that missing weight, I do not want to feel, I've gone cold without your warmth. Where'd you go? Did I wrong you somehow? I feel so lost without you here. I loved you but you've gone without a word. this is for someone tht was close to my heart, enjoy ppl and comment __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra Last edited by Blade X; Sep 17, 2006 at 08:40 AM.
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JustLoseIt TehNemoFesh Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I is a Michiganer. Posts: 853 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 160	Re: Where'd you go? Wow........... I don't even know what to say really. But how the Poem is anyhow, It's Great. __________________ Bass You did a Marvelous Job!
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hinata89 Newbie Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Canada EH? Posts: 84 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 145	Re: Where'd you go? yay. i'm second to post. it was really beautiful. but sad. and when a poem brings out feelings in others, you know it's good. when reading this i felt your sadness at the situation and also felt a stiring inside that made me think of a similar situation in my life.
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,315	Re: Where'd you go? this is for my most recent ex coz we're not together.. __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,783 Thanks: 20 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 2,476	Re: Where'd you go? very cool poem man and the love hee really rings true with alot of people its a shame ti ends like it does but love is a double edge sword and you risk getting cut evry time you love but its worth the risk thats for sure __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Yippy123 Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: England Posts: 30 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Where'd you go? Waa cries nooo i cant take it! its so sad... Yes it is a shame how it ended but at least u have warm memories
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