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Reply With QuoteI like this. It's really sweet and the simple rhyme scheme makes it seem innocent. It's a really enjoyable poem.
They say that hope has feathers,
A fact which might be true,
Because my hope has just flew away,
Since I fell in love with you.
When hope flies away,
Where does it go?
It might be out there waiting for me,
Or gone with Winter's snow.
Is my hope behind the clouds,
The ones that hide the moon?
I wish I knew where my hope has gone,
I wish I'd find it soon.
Last edited by Seirika; Aug 08, 2007 at 11:00 AM.
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
I like this. It's really sweet and the simple rhyme scheme makes it seem innocent. It's a really enjoyable poem.
This is a great poem, I it because it is a simple poem, It's not complicated just simple and thats great.
Thank you,i'm glad the both of you like it.^^
I really didn't think this would turn out to be simple,lol,but that's a good thing
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
Ah! Dood, you're my hero..
Lovely poem, I really like the (face value) message it gives.
Some of the rhymes aren't as good as others, but it still goes well with itself.
Nice work here.
the love you withhold is the pain you carry.
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