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    Where I Belong

    I dream of the day
    When I'll be where I belong
    Your touch I crave
    Your heart I cherish
    For that I love you
    Forever I want this to last
    I rather die at the stike of 12
    Than to ever let you go
    Has you ever wished to more?
    Ever dreamed of what you wish to come true?
    I care not of what others say
    As for I know where my heart belongs
    There's no regret, no mistake
    I reach out to you
    Hope that my touch will reach you
    For I love you so that I cry myself to sleep
    You are my soul mate
    And my every being is yours
    I watch as the time ticks by
    For soon I'll be where I belong
    In your arms is where.....
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    Re: Where I Belong

    I really like this poem. I would change Has you ever wished to more?
    To Have you ever wished to more?

    Also As For I know where my heart belongs.
    To For I know where my heart belongs.

    Your poem is great and I feel privalaged to read it. Keep up the good work.
    ™Mommy To Micah And Shawn!™


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    Re: Where I Belong

    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm going to make post more!
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    Re: Where I Belong

    Is this for the person that you are going to marry sorry I saw it in your signature. I'm trying to put two and two together and I figure that the person is why you wrote this.
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    Re: Where I Belong

    Wow! This was such a sweet and loving poem! I sooooo loved it! The love that you poured into this is amazing! I could so feel the love from this! Awesome job and keep up the awesome work!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Where I Belong

    lovely piece of work
    good job, keep it up

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    Re: Where I Belong

    Keep up the nice work! I like how you make each line explode with the emotion of love! This poem is very well written and congratulations on your marriage!

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    Re: Where I Belong

    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Honestly I was thinking of my fiancee when I wrote this.
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