Where I Belong

HieisLove · Jan 13, 2007, 10:13 AM

I dream of the day
When I'll be where I belong
Your touch I crave
Your heart I cherish
For that I love you
Forever I want this to last
I rather die at the stike of 12
Than to ever let you go
Has you ever wished to more?
Ever dreamed of what you wish to come true?
I care not of what others say
As for I know where my heart belongs
There's no regret, no mistake
I reach out to you
Hope that my touch will reach you
For I love you so that I cry myself to sleep
You are my soul mate
And my every being is yours
I watch as the time ticks by
For soon I'll be where I belong
In your arms is where.....

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 13, 2007, 10:31 AM

I really like this poem. I would change Has you ever wished to more?
To Have you ever wished to more?

Also As For I know where my heart belongs.
To For I know where my heart belongs.

Your poem is great and I feel privalaged to read it. Keep up the good work.

HieisLove · Jan 13, 2007, 10:35 AM

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm going to make post more!

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 13, 2007, 10:39 AM

Is this for the person that you are going to marry sorry I saw it in your signature. I'm trying to put two and two together and I figure that the person is why you wrote this.

Shinigami's_Angel · Jan 14, 2007, 01:35 PM

Wow! This was such a sweet and loving poem! I sooooo loved it! The love that you poured into this is amazing! I could so feel the love from this! Awesome job and keep up the awesome work!

deftbeat · Jan 15, 2007, 02:57 PM

lovely piece of work
good job, keep it up

BlueFox1 · Jan 16, 2007, 03:08 AM

Keep up the nice work! I like how you make each line explode with the emotion of love! This poem is very well written and congratulations on your marriage!

HieisLove · Jan 16, 2007, 09:54 AM

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Honestly I was thinking of my fiancee when I wrote this.

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 16, 2007, 09:57 AM

Well congradulations on the engagement and I'm glad that you made such a wonderful poem while thinking about someone you loved.

HieisLove · Jan 16, 2007, 10:07 AM

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed my work!! hehe

Jan 13, 2007, 10:13 AM	#1 (permalink)
HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,048	Where I Belong I dream of the day When I'll be where I belong Your touch I crave Your heart I cherish For that I love you Forever I want this to last I rather die at the stike of 12 Than to ever let you go Has you ever wished to more? Ever dreamed of what you wish to come true? I care not of what others say As for I know where my heart belongs There's no regret, no mistake I reach out to you Hope that my touch will reach you For I love you so that I cry myself to sleep You are my soul mate And my every being is yours I watch as the time ticks by For soon I'll be where I belong In your arms is where..... __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,059	Re: Where I Belong I really like this poem. I would change Has you ever wished to more? To Have you ever wished to more? Also As For I know where my heart belongs. To For I know where my heart belongs. Your poem is great and I feel privalaged to read it. Keep up the good work. __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,048	Re: Where I Belong Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm going to make post more! __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,059	Re: Where I Belong Is this for the person that you are going to marry sorry I saw it in your signature. I'm trying to put two and two together and I figure that the person is why you wrote this. __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,351	Re: Where I Belong Wow! This was such a sweet and loving poem! I sooooo loved it! The love that you poured into this is amazing! I could so feel the love from this! Awesome job and keep up the awesome work! __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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deftbeat Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Philippines Posts: 427 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 3,402	Re: Where I Belong lovely piece of work good job, keep it up __________________ aethereality : celestial-star My AO Gallery : Minitokyo
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BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,176	Re: Where I Belong Keep up the nice work! I like how you make each line explode with the emotion of love! This poem is very well written and congratulations on your marriage! __________________
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HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,048	Re: Where I Belong Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Honestly I was thinking of my fiancee when I wrote this. __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,059	Re: Where I Belong Well congradulations on the engagement and I'm glad that you made such a wonderful poem while thinking about someone you loved. __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,048	Re: Where I Belong Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed my work!! hehe __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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