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My slender form is trembling
The past, I'm not remembering
A hell my world's resembling
...But where is my angel now?
The cold, I fear is setting in,
The darkness here is getting in
My soul, a plague, eternal sin
...And where is my angel now?
My eyes turn up towards the sky
Searching for a reason why
With my last ounce of strength, I cry,
"...So, where is my angel now?"
This world has nothing left for me
Reality's not hard to see
One question rings eternally...
..."Where was my angel then?..."
very awesome poem here and i like how you were asking for an angel
when you need one in your dar times but never got one ,real
life is exactly like this and this poem speaks the truth about it.
thanks I felt this way an decided to pour my thoughts into it... then came up with this ^^ It turned out real good.
yea it did thats how they made and yuy did really good pouring your thought's
i do to sometimes but nt as good as this lol though i dont reealy go for my thoughts kmuch i usalu go with what i am feeling at the time . i get the 2 mixed up sometime also lol but i still like yours alot
I like the way this poem is structured! Your asking for your angel in you time of need but they are not responding to you cry! Awesome poem and very well written!
BlueFox1
Wow, most rhyming poems here suck. You have good meter and rhyme and I never really lost in interest in what I was reading. Nice job.
i like the poem.. very inspirational.. LOL.. and so.. CuTE... nice one!!!:2thumbs::2thumbs:.. what else do you got?? i mean poems you got?? the poem is kinda sad.. specially in the last stanza!!! huhuhu.... but still love it!!
I agree with Holder ( yup had to quote all of it.)Quote:
Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice
this is a very good poem, and I could not have said better.