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    Where is my Angel?

    My slender form is trembling
    The past, I'm not remembering
    A hell my world's resembling
    ...But where is my angel now?

    The cold, I fear is setting in,
    The darkness here is getting in
    My soul, a plague, eternal sin
    ...And where is my angel now?

    My eyes turn up towards the sky
    Searching for a reason why
    With my last ounce of strength, I cry,
    "...So, where is my angel now?"

    This world has nothing left for me
    Reality's not hard to see
    One question rings eternally...
    ..."Where was my angel then?..."

    "OMG WTF!? YOU DONT JUST GO MAKING FLASHY POSES OUTTA NOWHERE LIKE THAT YOU B^%TARD!!!"


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    Re: Where is my Angel?

    very awesome poem here and i like how you were asking for an angel
    when you need one in your dar times but never got one ,real
    life is exactly like this and this poem speaks the truth about it.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Where is my Angel?

    thanks I felt this way an decided to pour my thoughts into it... then came up with this ^^ It turned out real good.

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    Re: Where is my Angel?

    yea it did thats how they made and yuy did really good pouring your thought's
    i do to sometimes but nt as good as this lol though i dont reealy go for my thoughts kmuch i usalu go with what i am feeling at the time . i get the 2 mixed up sometime also lol but i still like yours alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Where is my Angel?

    I like the way this poem is structured! Your asking for your angel in you time of need but they are not responding to you cry! Awesome poem and very well written!

    BlueFox1

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    Re: Where is my Angel?

    Wow, most rhyming poems here suck. You have good meter and rhyme and I never really lost in interest in what I was reading. Nice job.
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    Re: Where is my Angel?

    i like the poem.. very inspirational.. LOL.. and so.. CuTE... nice one!!!.. what else do you got?? i mean poems you got?? the poem is kinda sad.. specially in the last stanza!!! huhuhu.... but still love it!!

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    Re: Where is my Angel?

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    very awesome poem here and i like how you were asking for an angel
    when you need one in your dar times but never got one ,real
    life is exactly like this and this poem speaks the truth about it.
    I agree with Holder ( yup had to quote all of it.)
    this is a very good poem, and I could not have said better.

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