it's nice dude but i think u went overboard with the use of where. U still havent managed use it to great effect like i do. U should go read my poems using repetitive and learn.
Where?:
Where?
Where will I go?
Where will I find you?
Where?
Where should I run?
Where should I hide?
Where?
Where should I fight?
Where should I search?
Where?
Where will you find me?
Where will I find you?
Where?
Where will we love?
Where will we suffer?
Where?
it's nice dude but i think u went overboard with the use of where. U still havent managed use it to great effect like i do. U should go read my poems using repetitive and learn.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
/Heh
I have no control over what I wirte really.
It just pop's out.
I will tell you this though.
"Judge not others,only yourself"
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