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    Where'd you go?

    We were so close together,
    We declared our love for each other,
    I couldn't wait to see you each day,
    You missed me when we didn't talk.

    I enjoyed the sound of your sweet voice,
    You loved looking into my eyes,
    We held each other close each day,
    Exploring each other.

    But there's a gap,
    Silence rings through me,
    My eyes searching for you,
    Your sweet, beautiful face,

    You lefted without a word,
    There's no ending to our story,
    The lights have gone out on me,
    The play is unfinished,
    There is no Romeo and Juliet.

    I walked feeling light,
    But that missing weight,
    I do not want to feel,
    I've gone cold without your warmth.

    Where'd you go?
    Did I wrong you somehow?
    I feel so lost without you here.
    I loved you but you've gone without a word.

    this is for someone tht was close to my heart, enjoy ppl and comment
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    Re: Where'd you go?

    Wow........... I don't even know what to say really.

    But how the Poem is anyhow, It's Great.

    Thanks Pyroo. :]

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    Re: Where'd you go?

    yay. i'm second to post. it was really beautiful. but sad. and when a poem brings out feelings in others, you know it's good. when reading this i felt your sadness at the situation and also felt a stiring inside that made me think of a similar situation in my life.

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    this is for my most recent ex coz we're not together..

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Where'd you go?

    very cool poem man and the love hee really rings true with alot of people
    its a shame ti ends like it does but love is a double edge sword and you risk
    getting cut evry time you love but its worth the risk thats for sure
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Where'd you go?

    Waa *cries* nooo i cant take it! its so sad... Yes it is a shame how it ended but at least u have warm memories

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