Wow........... I don't even know what to say really.
But how the Poem is anyhow, It's Great.
We were so close together,
We declared our love for each other,
I couldn't wait to see you each day,
You missed me when we didn't talk.
I enjoyed the sound of your sweet voice,
You loved looking into my eyes,
We held each other close each day,
Exploring each other.
But there's a gap,
Silence rings through me,
My eyes searching for you,
Your sweet, beautiful face,
You lefted without a word,
There's no ending to our story,
The lights have gone out on me,
The play is unfinished,
There is no Romeo and Juliet.
I walked feeling light,
But that missing weight,
I do not want to feel,
I've gone cold without your warmth.
Where'd you go?
Did I wrong you somehow?
I feel so lost without you here.
I loved you but you've gone without a word.
this is for someone tht was close to my heart, enjoy ppl and comment
Last edited by Blade X; Sep 17, 2006 at 08:40 AM.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
Wow........... I don't even know what to say really.
But how the Poem is anyhow, It's Great.
Thanks Pyroo. :]
yay. i'm second to post. it was really beautiful. but sad. and when a poem brings out feelings in others, you know it's good. when reading this i felt your sadness at the situation and also felt a stiring inside that made me think of a similar situation in my life.
this is for my most recent ex coz we're not together..
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
very cool poem man and the love hee really rings true with alot of people
its a shame ti ends like it does but love is a double edge sword and you risk
getting cut evry time you love but its worth the risk thats for sure
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Waa *cries* nooo i cant take it! its so sad... Yes it is a shame how it ended but at least u have warm memories![]()
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