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    whipers in the dark

    whipers in the dark, "i hear you"
    i hear you.. as she looks for the voice so near
    i hear your voice calling for me, but where are you?
    looking as if she was in fear

    nothing but darkness all around me
    as she hears a whiper "i need you"
    just so dark it make it were she couldn't see..
    lost and confused hearing you say, "i hope to see you soon"

    then comes a bright light
    then she scrams "where are you!"
    as an image comes in sight
    stand still not knowing what to do

    tears falls down her face then whispers "i see you"
    starts to run as she sees you appear
    trys to reach for you as the wind blew
    can't belive your here

    holds you close in my arms
    looks at you with a smile
    in her face looking alarmed
    he looks at her saying, "its been awile"

    then it all gose dark... where are you?
    as she starts to see you disappear she scrams "no! you can't go!"
    as tears fall down her face not knowing what to do
    closes her eyes then opens them then she would see a glow

    then she awakens and sits up with a sad look
    with tears coming down her face it was just a dream...
    lays back down what a mistake
    to think he was really here.. she says, "i could just scream!"

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    Re: whipers in the dark

    You're a really great poet, have you ever thought about starting your own poetry site?
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    Re: whipers in the dark

    Quote Originally Posted by dracoff2007 View Post
    You're a really great poet, have you ever thought about starting your own poetry site?
    umm no not really i don't think i'm that good. ^.^ but thank you~!~

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    Re: whipers in the dark

    you're welcome. I think that your poetry is really great
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    Re: whipers in the dark

    Hmm..as I read the passage of your poem..
    I think I really was there in the poem...
    then she awakens and sits up with a sad look
    with tears coming down her face it was just a dream...
    To think that was a only a dream it really did to what's really happening in the girl
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: whipers in the dark

    I'm sure all of us have had dreams like that too, you think it's real, then you wake up and realize that you were just dreaming
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    Re: whipers in the dark

    Quote Originally Posted by dracoff2007 View Post
    I'm sure all of us have had dreams like that too, you think it's real, then you wake up and realize that you were just dreaming
    i know its sad. i have dreams like that all the time i feel like i'm with him then i awaken from my sleep then see its just a dram... its sad.

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    Re: whipers in the dark

    I have those dreams all the time, but they're mostly about something I have to do at school, and I mess up in my dream, but get it right in real life
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