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    Whirlpool

    My mind is swirling like an
    astronomically sized whirlpool
    in an endless sea of blue.

    Am I happy with my life?
    Do I even care anymore?
    Does anyone else?

    I walk through the woods
    searching for answers.
    All I get in reply is the wind
    whispering softly in my ear...

    "All good things come in due time.
    Just be patient, you'll see."

    Again the whirlpool spins...
    'Round and 'round we go.
    How much longer do I have to wait?

    Lonliness is a pain.
    A pain that itches away at your soul
    like an old dried out scab; waiting to
    be picked...

    Does anyone have any Neosporin?


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    Re: Whirlpool

    Ok It's a painful and sad poem for me ..and It's very nice ..
    well that 's what can i say ...keep it up ..

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    Re: Whirlpool

    lol... again you end a sad poem with a phrase that makes it all unserious and funny... it's seems like you just can't finnish a poem without throwing a lill bit of optimism in it... I'm glad to hear that...
    This time I think I can answer:
    "Am I happy with my life?"-> you should be, there are people in a lot worse situations, believe me and I'm sure if you look at it with brgihter eyes it'd be all ok, if not- you can fix it
    "Do I even care anymore?"-> of course you care, you wouldn't ask otherways... you should care! care!
    "Does anyone else?"-> yes, we do. duh!!!
    "How much longer do I have to wait?"-> ok, this is a question too straight to answer... but would you feel better to know there are other people with this question in their minds? ^^

    Anyways, I enjoyed reading this poem- a nice work!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Whirlpool

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    lol... again you end a sad poem with a phrase that makes it all unserious and funny... it's seems like you just can't finnish a poem without throwing a lill bit of optimism in it... I'm glad to hear that...
    This time I think I can answer:
    "Am I happy with my life?"-> you should be, there are people in a lot worse situations, believe me and I'm sure if you look at it with brgihter eyes it'd be all ok, if not- you can fix it
    "Do I even care anymore?"-> of course you care, you wouldn't ask otherways... you should care! care!
    "Does anyone else?"-> yes, we do. duh!!!
    "How much longer do I have to wait?"-> ok, this is a question too straight to answer... but would you feel better to know there are other people with this question in their minds? ^^

    Anyways, I enjoyed reading this poem- a nice work!!!
    Don't get me wrong, I'm "happy" for the most part. I could be worse, you're right. I just feel kinda hollow sometimes--if you catch my drift. But it's not like I'm giving up on life or anything. ^_^

    Thanks for your words of encouragement, Laura. I really appreciate it.


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    Re: Whirlpool

    Your happier now then you used to be. It's less forced too. You just keep mourning the loss of something that was worth little in the first place. It shouldn't be missed. You'll realize that one day and move on. No worries everything will be fine one day.

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    Re: Whirlpool

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Your happier now then you used to be. It's less forced too. You just keep mourning the loss of something that was worth little in the first place. It shouldn't be missed. You'll realize that one day and move on. No worries everything will be fine one day.
    LOL, you're starting to sound like the wind I was writing about. ^_^


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