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    Whispers Of The Eternaly Damned

    Winds of sorrow
    gust up over the hillside,
    covered with the barren trees
    and littered
    with the crackling of dead leaves.

    Though spring now,
    winter's ghost is howling
    outside the window,
    making day seem dark
    with momentary night.

    Flee the cavalcade of lamenting noise,
    which rides the currents of the air.
    Flee traveler,
    for there is tragedy in it,
    dying perhaps, running from the already dead.

    The shaking of the once steady trees
    brings a certain fear
    to his unready heart.
    Shadow, dragged from mountain depths
    gives rise to unbearable exhaustion.

    Temptress,
    the sleep of ages sings,
    drawing the traveler off his well made path.
    Walk now on the dark road,
    some unheard voice does chant.

    Find the ways of darkness,
    and the groping blindness of the grave.
    Formless the air now billows up
    and shifts the branches from their pose.
    Lost in eternal damnation.
    The unspoken of its kind

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    Re: Whispers Of The Eternaly Damned

    Hah~! he strikes again with yet another good poem...

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    Re: Whispers Of The Eternaly Damned

    thats right and I'll keep on striking til I'm out of ideas.
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    Re: Whispers Of The Eternaly Damned

    no way you aint gonna be dead with ideas...i won't let u...

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    Re: Whispers Of The Eternaly Damned

    lol that's true I'm never out of idaes but there's going to be the first,
    and then after I get more ideas for sure you'll see even more poems then before.

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    Re: Whispers Of The Eternaly Damned

    another poem with the theme of darkness.i like that.Something that is totally the opposite to love and i can feel the words as if i was actually witnessing this.good job.

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    hey JefferyXie thanks for the comment^_^
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