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    Re: Whispers of the heart

    I just said on your new poem that you do create immages in my head ^^ You do describe some things nicely, but you can always do more by just lingering around some details if you wish, describing the surroundings more. It will make the poem longer and harder to read maybe but it will create a nice dreamy aura... ^^

    Right now you are doing a very good work in describing the actions nicely ^^ And that's what creates thouse nice immages in my head... Very nice ^^ You might have some problems with the grammar but thaat doesn't spoil everything you're putting in there ^^

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    Re: Whispers of the heart

    ....Wow...This is really good ryomakurosaki!! I mean it! Such wonderful emotion!! I could see it all in my mind!! Wonderful work!! ^__^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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