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    White Flowers

    White Flowers: (here goes nothing! )

    My head hurts with the thought
    Where it came from I know not
    -With these flowers where you lie
    I couldn't even say goodbye
    Petals of white came down with rain
    As it poured, so did my pain
    And I denyed it until now...
    Gotta conquer this-but I don't know how
    Where these thorns of white die and grow
    You'll rest with me-forever so!
    In my heart os hearts you will remain
    As it poured, so did my pain
    When you died-so did I
    Now my soul remains where these white flowers lie...

    Sorry to leave you--I want to see the world
    These Autumn leaves crunch under my feet
    Breathing-burdensome down the street
    With a white flower pressed against my hand
    The answer to my problems is just ahead
    And i'll struggle-relentless in this troubled land
    Until I come to understand-
    -This motivation pushing me forward
    It's my life Im heading toward
    Today is where I say goodbye
    To my best friend where these white flowers lie
    I leave these white flowers by your side
    One day I swear you'll wear them with pride
    My imagination is no longer held down by your death
    I will make your name known with my every breath!

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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    Re: White Flowers

    Just want to say thanks for taking the time to read my writing and replying to it giving feedback... *kudos* Well I did have time to actually sit and read yours and I must say that this was or better yet is a good read... I like how "white flowers" is a memory metaphorically speaking on a pain that haunts you, but you tend to be set free by change on the outlook of what that suffering inspired within you Making "white flowers" not to die in vain, so to speak... Well I might be wrong, but this is what I took from it in which inspired me... *Thanks*

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    Re: White Flowers

    Wow, nice interpretation. Thats exactly what i was thinking as i worte. And btw, no prob, i really like your poetry, and im kinda surprised you were inspired...thats the second time someones ever said that O.O

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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    Re: White Flowers

    that totally sounds like it should be some sort of song >_> lol nice work
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    Re: White Flowers

    ahh flowers of mourning.. splendid... ^^ what kind of flower will i have hmm...

    Have to say, love those rhymes ^^

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