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    Who am i?

    ok now this poem isnt suppose to make "sense". lol i say that becuase well it just doesnt. i mean u read a poem and u either like it or u dont like it. and this poem isnt a typical standard poem. when u read poems it mainly has one image/general idea its based upon. but this poem dont try and figure out the image im trying to protray but instead think of how im describing my words with adjectives and verbs and all that jazz

    Who am i?

    A face, stern and confused;
    A form, tall and proud;
    My voice, a fly, a bird and yet not silent.

    To my parents i am a bud of roses, a diamond of the sea
    And in my teacher's eyes, ia m a patient girl,
    but really i have no patience in this world.

    And to my self, well, i am a good friend,
    a great daughter, a talkative chld.
    In my family i play the shy girl
    the on who never steps out of her box.

    As a friend, i am a pal, a pillow and confidant
    To my enemies, i'm to be blasted
    to be abominated
    to be condemned
    And to those i do not know, a person

    I am no more than a joyful, moody girl,
    a happy child.

    Who am i anyway?
    I am a girl that is loud
    and a friend who is trustful
    I am alway a chameleon but never of one color.

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    Re: Who am i?

    nice poem
    ok now lets see you sayed that you're a "chameleon but never of one colour"-this could mean that you have more than one personality
    you've discribed yourself in many ways:"a joyful,moody girl,a happy child","a girl that is loud and a friend who is trustful'',"i am a good friend,a great daughter,a talkative child","shy girl","a patient girl","a bud of rosses,a diamond of the sea"
    maybe i'm not sow good at poems but i think that this one shows exactly how you are and how you feel

    "If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert

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    Re: Who am i?

    EXACTLY!!!^^ u hit the nail on the head good job thanks for reading^^
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    Re: Who am i?

    This is a great way of describing your self. I feel like i know you to some extent.

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    hahaha thnx^^ thats what i was really going for
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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