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    Who am i? Do not enter my world...

    i don't really know who i am...
    i live alone in a world which no one understands... or dare enters.
    not the cool one, nor the geek...
    just the outcast, skimming the surface of social life.

    communication? out of my vocabulary.
    friends? seem to become close and then fade away.
    parents? want me to be someone i can't be.
    family? they have their own life...
    a person...liked in the open and despised in secret;
    ignored by all else.

    sister? ...now there's a word i love!
    accepted for eternity in my secret real form.
    loved, cherished, the only one i can always count on.
    birth, maybe i would have been accepted elsewhere.
    here, anchored as life passes by in a ship.
    why cant i get on that ship?

    happiness... is always playing hide and seek.
    God...loves me but left me here.
    at least he left me her.
    pain, comes and goes, becoming numb.
    suffering; seems to be so much worse around...
    will i always be so selfish, that i think mine hurts more?

    love; seem to be drowning in it, yet never really touching it.
    far qwqy i live in a fairy land... filled with swords & magic.
    WATCH OUT! with enemies, allies and those who don't give a damn.
    should i choose... or will everyone else choose...

    A little confusing? Well that's how I view life... confusion.
    Life's short so have a laugh about it

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    i didnt think it was confusing at all^^ in some ways i kinda understand others i dont but you did a very good job wiht this poem kudos
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    This is such an amazing poem!!!!!!!!
    I know exactly what you are trying to express.......great job!!!!!!!!!

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    Um, it was a lovely poem. Keep up the excellent work, my friend. ^_^

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    wow cool poem its pretty good i hope to see more from you

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    Hum WOW you are displaying your confusion in a great way I understand how that is. your always shut off from the rest of the world and it seems like no one is there. (I went through the same thing) always wondering if that ship of life (quoting your poem) will drop in your port but seems like it wont.
    hum anyways (sorry I got rambling.) that is an amayzing poem. great job. I hope to see more from you if you ever want to talk just a PM me. anyways keep up the good work!
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    oh wow... nice description..and nice way with words... i like this 1... keep it up ^^ would like to see more of your work..

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    i don't really know who i am...
    i live alone in a world which no one understands... or dare enters

    that very first line got me hooked! It is so true! I love it! I feel that way sometimes. Great job! Keep up the work I 'd like to see more!
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