Hmmm.... Nice.... I like the way you've writen it and it was nice to get to meet you a bit here ^^

There were some gramar mistakes though... And in some places some things just seemed a bit out of place (like the appearing of the fairy land in the last stranza... I mean, I absolutely know what you mean, because I have a fairy land just like that... maybe even weirder, but I'd put it in... with more description... slower and softer ^^)

Anyways, don't know if you undeerstand what I mean, ignore it if you don't, because this poem still is quite great and I really enjoyed reading it and I hope to see more ^^