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    Thumbs up who gave you the right.

    How dare you try to change me
    who are you to say i need help
    who gave you the right to try to make me
    become your android.
    you have no power over me.
    you hold no key significance at all.
    Yet you have the audacity to tell
    me theres something wrong with me.
    you dare walk to me and tell me about
    my flaws.
    how dare you tell me that i have a problem
    Now it looks like while your stepping to me because
    your trying to make me a product of you,
    all you have done is got yourself an issue
    and that doesnt make me happy
    Im not easily changed
    Nor do i take to people pointing out my flaws
    so who are you but a reflection of me
    Because you all i see in the mirror
    the only person that can truly judge
    me.
    Last edited by LostbutFound; Aug 19, 2007 at 01:35 PM. Reason: color change
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: who gave you the right.

    wow...what anger.. a lot of feeling pin pointed and surged in this poem... powerful words.. @.@ nice nice... good job...

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    Re: who gave you the right.

    Lol thank you rayme
    *smiles*
    im not tht bad
    i was actully bored when i wrote it
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    Re: who gave you the right.

    Very good poem I like the anger you have put in that poem its very intense but very good I can really understand what you were feeling in this poem...keep up the good work can't wait to hear more!!
    Last edited by tora_tora_yatta; Aug 19, 2007 at 12:14 PM. Reason: I want to cancel this reply I just wrote

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    Re: who gave you the right.

    Very good poem I like the anger you have put in that poem its very intense but very good I can really understand what you were feeling in this poem...keep up the good work can't wait to hear more!! Though I would suggest maybe put the poem in a different color for its a little hard to read I am so sorry LostbutFound about the replying twice I did not mean to do this on purpose

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    Thank you so much and i'll be sure to change the color thank you
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    Re: who gave you the right.

    Now That's What I'm Talking About!!! everyone is always judge mental and points out everyone else's faults but when someone else points them out they get all pissy... anyway... i like it it's a good poem.

    *shouts* hey ray... i brought pie!!!! *waves it around* Come out and get some!!!

    he he he *whispers* this almost always works...

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    Re: who gave you the right.

    Wow I love this.

    Yea this is like another wow moment.lol.

    I thought this poem was liek one of the best. It has soo much emotion and everything.

    I love it. Keep it up.

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