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Aug 19, 2007, 09:03 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo
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 Credits: 814 |  who gave you the right. How dare you try to change me who are you to say i need help who gave you the right to try to make me become your android. you have no power over me. you hold no key significance at all. Yet you have the audacity to tell me theres something wrong with me. you dare walk to me and tell me about my flaws. how dare you tell me that i have a problem Now it looks like while your stepping to me because your trying to make me a product of you, all you have done is got yourself an issue and that doesnt make me happy Im not easily changed Nor do i take to people pointing out my flaws so who are you but a reflection of me Because you all i see in the mirror the only person that can truly judge me.
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Aug 19, 2007, 09:11 AM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 58,536 | Re: who gave you the right. wow...what anger.. a lot of feeling pin pointed and surged in this poem... powerful words.. @.@ nice nice... good job... *gulps* ps: guys..don't mess with them gurls.. @.@ *hides* |
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Aug 19, 2007, 09:50 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo
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Credits: 814 | Re: who gave you the right. Lol thank you rayme *smiles* im not tht bad i was actully bored when i wrote it
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Aug 19, 2007, 12:10 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In the arms of my loved one!
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Credits: 616 | Re: who gave you the right. Very good poem I like the anger you have put in that poem its very intense but very good I can really understand what you were feeling in this poem...keep up the good work can't wait to hear more!! 
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Aug 19, 2007, 12:11 PM
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Credits: 616 | Re: who gave you the right. Very good poem I like the anger you have put in that poem its very intense but very good I can really understand what you were feeling in this poem...keep up the good work can't wait to hear more!! Though I would suggest maybe put the poem in a different color for its a little hard to read  I am so sorry LostbutFound about the replying twice I did not mean to do this on purpose
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Aug 19, 2007, 01:34 PM
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Credits: 814 | Re: who gave you the right. Thank you so much and i'll be sure to change the color thank you *smiles*
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Aug 19, 2007, 06:19 PM
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| Banned  | Re: who gave you the right. Now That's What I'm Talking About!!! everyone is always judge mental and points out everyone else's faults but when someone else points them out they get all pissy... anyway... i like it it's a good poem. *shouts* hey ray... i brought pie!!!! *waves it around* Come out and get some!!! he he he *whispers* this almost always works... |
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Aug 19, 2007, 06:26 PM
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Credits: 14,091 | Re: who gave you the right. Wow I love this. Yea this is like another wow moment.lol. I thought this poem was liek one of the best. It has soo much emotion and everything. I love it. Keep it up.
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Credits: 814 | Re: who gave you the right. Thank you all very much for the comments on the poem
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Aug 31, 2007, 05:04 AM
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Credits: 49,122 | Re: who gave you the right. Very strong, made shivers run down my spine... I have felt like that too and this made me remember those moments and it's great to sometimes feel anger too, this really made my heart beat faster. I hope I'll see more from you in the four pages of poems I have to read... How glad am I to be back and see so many faces in the poem section! |
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