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  1. Dec 01, 2007 08:25 AM #1
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    Who We Were

    I wish now that I would have given you more.
    It pained me to watch your tears fall to the floor.
    How can I still be in your heart?
    Why are my actions not tearing you apart?
    Will you stand beside me forever?
    Even though your eyes say never...

    Can't we be who we were?
    Why can't we be who we were?
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  2. Dec 01, 2007 08:34 AM #2
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    Re: Who We Were

    The rhythm is this poem is excellent and so are the words......which go great with the tile
    great job!!!!!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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