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    To Whom It May Concern

    Everything i did was for the
    way i saw how thing would be
    then the thunder came down
    and the lightning struck my
    heart and then i died.

    Poeple here are just a bunch of
    traitors to there sole not really
    giving a damn about how life
    could have been.oh what the hell
    is wrong with you ?

    i have tried to keep a smile when
    you keep puching button that are better
    left alone ,you treaded water that was better
    left with out a ripple ,now look at what you did.

    Life was eas till you made living hell from it
    i cant hold back anymore because of all this
    bull crap that seems to make your world go round
    and that just make my stomach turn.

    they say life is like a box of razors for each
    time you scrw up you have a new way to
    cut your self,so i will let you bleed to
    death while i sit watching.

    nothing matters anymore i dont care who's
    right or wrong i will just walk away from it
    all and from what you did to ruin my world.

    my life has new meaning now its about
    making life for you a living hell,and making you
    have the tears that i have always waisted
    for no reason .

    there has been alot of bull crap going on latley and
    i am fed up with it this pome pretty much expressed my
    anger and how things have pissed me off, but in the end
    i wasited my energy being pissed at somone who really
    nevr saw anything but how to ruin somone elses life.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: To Whome It May Concern

    Correct capitalization and punctuation. I'd love to see that in this poem.
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    Re: To Whome It May Concern

    That was a very blunt and harsh poem,but it did express the feelings you had at time you wrote it. I can't wait to read your next one which I hope isn't so cruel lol.
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    Re: To Whome It May Concern

    Wow Bro! This poem has some serious emotion! Who ever it was that decided to cross you should fear this poem! Truly an awesome job! Keep up the excellent work Bro!

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    Re: To Whome It May Concern

    Well I don't know what got your boxers in a bunch but you should never take your hate out on a person in a poem. I see that the person has really gotten under your skin but why did you put up with it in the first place? Well I guess this is the last poem that we will see from you because of you being banned but I hope the next one I go and read is more happier then this one. I'm sorry that you felt this way about someone and I'm not sure who it's about but maybe that person should go and take time to see what they do to peopls lives.

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